Saturday, July 2, 2011

Blogger Identity: It's All GOOD and Four Book Reviews

I know I promised to talk a load of rhubarb, and I will do so soon.
However, I want to take an interlude to reflect an important lesson I learned from my last post, and specifically, from a response to it by Mindy, and to share how that has helped me to tie up some questions with which I've been wrestling for some time regarding blogger identity. I also want to share some books I've been reading recently: four books, four different genres--novel, poetry, essays and raw food recipes.

First: the lesson. Mindy was baffled by my story about the triggering conversation with Phil, because I hadn't contextualized it as being a part of my eating disorder recovery/journey, and it seemed to her like I'd reacted to a compliment in a bizarre way.

To me, this was a wonderful lesson, both as a writer and touching the issue of blog identity. We should always be specific, give a context to the story and make explicit the purpose of telling the story. When we assume that our reader is smart and empathic, it behooves us to give her/him a framework within which to gather all the nuances and implications we're offering. As it was, I told the story from the side of my mouth, so to speak, because I'm still working out how to talk about that topic in a way that is interesting, potentially helpful to others and not triggering.

From here on, I intend to talk about sensitive things clearly and without fudging.

As for blogger identity, that discussion, together with this selection of books I want to review in a moment, cements my recent conclusion that it's all good! I can post several recipes per week and other food-related chat and still write a poetry blog. And vice versa. And body-image/recovery-related stuff, and nutritional research, and Alaskana, and gardening/homesteading: let's have it all on the table! Which means, I don't have to fudge anything and I don't have to think "Oh, I should be elliptical about this because my blog's not really supposed to be about that." This blog can be about anything that seems compelling and fascinating and worth sharing, and it may just so happen that words and food top the ratings most of the time.

OK? Good. Now to the books. The ground we're about to cover should amply illustrate this broader definition of 'blogger identity' I'm easing into.
First: a novel.
Cutting for Stone

Two of the book clubs I'm a member of picked Abraham Verghese's Cutting for Stone for this month or next. Since it's a 600-pager, I know that the few of us who double-dip book clubs were glad that both clubs picked it!

I read it our first couple days in Oregon. I couldn't put it down (except when I really had to)! It's a fascinating epic grounded in Ethiopia but with tendrils in India, the Middle East and the USA (and, more distantly, Scotland), spanning a period of time from the 1940's to the 2000's. It has the slow pace and freight of a 'big novel,' with retellings of single events through the eyes of different characters. The characters are engaging, and the high population of unusual foibles in them somehow seems quite believable: I never felt that I had to suspend disbelief for the sake of the story.

The medical history and details were utterly fascinating to me, and since I'm lucky enough to be pretty familiar with quite a lot of Indian cultural stuff, seeing it framed in the exotic Ethiopian context was even richer. The turbulent history of Ethiopia through that time period provided a backdrop to the events of the book: together with specific medical problems of the area, this enriched, rather than hijacking, the plot.

There were a few infelicities of language dotted around here and there, but I know I'm super-picky about that kind of thing, and given the sheer mass of words, I forgave them (although I wish an editor had caught them!)

One last thing: Phil really enjoyed it too, and we have very different taste in books.

Moving on to Poetry...
Sister: Poems

Erin already posted a review of Nickole Brown's Sister a couple weeks back, warning that you wouldn't be able to put the book down. I concur: I read it at a sitting a couple days ago, and then started rereading immediately. Nickole was one of the faculty at the recent Writers' Conference here, and gave some wonderful advice, especially about style, revision and editing. I was lucky enough to get to talk with her some about my own work, and hope to continue a connection with her.

Aside from the meticulous visual presentation of each poem (an aspect of poem-revision that she really opened up to me: as I'm always saying, I'm not visual, and it's a revelation how manipulating the white space can do things for you)...aside from this, I was enthralled by the compelling onward drive of the narrative linking the poems together, yet mesmerized by the crystal, crucial lyricism that pervaded each one. I was also inspired by the courage the poems embodied. Peggy Shumaker gives the advice to "write what you think is taboo:" a squeamish injunction, and one Nickole fulfills in a tour du force of bluntness, provocation and mystery.

Essays next:

On Looking: Essays

Our friend Lynn loaned me her copy of Lia Purpura's On Looking. Purpura is on the faculty at PLU and I'm planning to take a class with her at the Residency this August. She's a poet and translator as well as an essayist, so I'm particularly excited to connect with her.

These are meticulously detailed introspections and external observations, lyrical and fractured: gorgeous use of language and many unorthodox sentence structures. So many little things nagging at the corner of your eye: so many surprising disorientations she takes the time to evoke, beautifully, that I thought I was the only person who saw or thought about. It's one of those books that arouses a real feeling of kinship in me: that despite her different location, her different circumstances, many of which are made explicit during the essays, she is speaking for me. As me.

Finally, raw food recipes! I'm coming late to the game on this one...

Ani's Raw Food Essentials: Recipes and Techniques for Mastering the Art of Live Food

...it was months ago, if not a year, that I recall many reviews of Ani's Raw Food Essentials on blogs I read, but when I found it on our library's "new books" shelf, I was glad to borrow it and take a look. It's been a while since I've had a big fat recipe book to leaf through.

I haven't tried any recipes yet--it's been barely a day, and I tend to read these books through like novels first. I love her attitude, energy and philosophy. I don't agree with everything that she says about different foods' merits and demerits, but that's probably no surprise. I do admire how the book is organized, with easy adaptations and morphs of one recipe into another, or 'accumulator' recipes, where several recipes are combined. Also, the emphasis on easy-to-source ingredients.

Here's my little complaint, though: why are raw food recipe books so often so poorly edited? It drives me nuts: per my 'blogger identity' conclusions above, readers--and writers--of raw food recipe books are just as smart, well-rounded, educated and deserving of well-edited books as anyone else! So why is this very well-written book by a very smart person made to look less professional because of shoddy editing? The most egregious example (so far): the top of p.31, the first page of a new chapter, contains a paragraph that begins in mid-sentence and has no relation to the facing page (a title/intro page) of any kind. There are other little typos too. In a recipe book, precision is reassuring.

If I had all the time to do all the good in the world that I wish I could do, and had not financial constraints, I would throw myself around a bit trying to put this right.

Do you have any major pet peeves that set you off like this? Any book recommendations, or 'must-try's from Ani's book?
Have a great Holiday Weekend!

12 comments:

  1. I know exactly what you mean about them being so badly edited!!
    LOL.
    I feel kind of bad for the people who wrote them!!! once I screwed a whole recipe up because of that!! And its funny I just saw Ani's raw book in the store a yesterday (:
    I love your blog! Hopefully you can connect with me on my blog sometime, Im fairly new in this big blog world (: I'm into the whole raw- and wellness thing too!

    xo
    Em

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  2. I wonder how long a book stays on the 'new' shelf at the library? I checked that out months ago! And honestly, I was a bit disappointed in it. Aside from the bad editing, it seemed she was rather preachy, and even contradicted herself a bit. I took a couple of ideas from it, but that's about it. I didn't feel the need to renew it or to find my own copy. Some of the recipes seemed unnecessarily complicated. I can't remember which ones now (as I said, it has been several months). I'll be interested to hear your reviews of any of the recipes you do try!

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  3. Great reflection on blogger identity. I love your blog because I can really relate to certain aspects of your life , but I am also interested in your ideas regarding parts of the world that are new to me.

    I've heard varied reviews about Cutting for Stone, the last one being negative, so you've peaked my interest in reading it again. I've flipped through the Ani Phyo book a number of times, but never felt the urge to buy it. Wish my library had it.

    My major pet peeve, not related to books, is when movies set in another country opt to use English with an accent as opposed to the native language with subtitles. I'm not sure why, but it drives me crazy. :)

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  4. Hey Cathy,

    That's so interesting that it's been on the shelves for a while. I'd never seen a raw food book in the library before and was quite excited (I used to be quite in the thick of that world). I do think that some books hang out on the 'new' shelf for a year or more, but others seem to cycle through more rapidly.

    Interesting, too, that you weren't impressed by it. I think that contradictions mar a lot of raw food books. Just reading through, I appreciate that it's actually a fair bit simpler than some comparable books, but even as a raw food chef, I have to say that a lot of raw gourmet recipes are striking me as pointless at the moment (that's an oversimplification, but for now...)

    I'll post if I do try some!
    love
    Ela

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  5. Hey Em!

    Welcome to this big blog world and thanks for visiting over here. I'll definitely look your blog up.

    I'm sorry you had a recipe fail because of poorly edited books: that must have been so frustrating. Maybe we as bloggers can all have some good influence to get books edited better.
    love
    Ela

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  6. kt--haha, that English accent thing drives me crazy too! My favorite movies to watch are foreign language movies because (depending on the language) I can either brush up or try to learn a bit by listening and following the subtitles, so the other option skeeves me of that!

    Interesting that you've heard negative reports of Cutting For Stone--I guess tastes vary, but I just thought it was so well done, it'd be hard not to like (unless you don't like long novels).

    I think your instinct is right on the Ani book: it won't tell you much you don't already know. I'm curious for her new Asian flavors book: she might have something really original there. Since the Homer library has this book, I bet you could get it to your library on Interlibrary loan.

    Thanks again for your kind comments about my blog.
    love
    Ela

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  7. I wish I had more time to read adult books. I usually am reading children's books to Hayden. She is always handing me them and snuggling up to listen. Now that Jacob is reading so well, he sometimes reads to her, too.

    The funny thing is that Hayden likes to look through cookbooks with me. She is a fan of food photography. Sometimes the food in the pics also influences her food choices that day. For example, if I want to make sure she eats her broccoli (she usually does, but occasionally gets bored of it), I just show her a picture in a cookbook and it makes her want to eat it.

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  8. Hi Ela,
    It's been a while since I've popped over to look at your blog, so I have some catching up to do. I was sorry to miss the writers' conference this year. It seems like such a shame to be here, in the same town, and not be able to attend.

    I just finished listening to Cutting For Stone. I started it on a drive to Anchorage, then kept listening on my commute into town and back. The narrator, with his Indian accent, did such a fabulous job. That book, plus another that I've read recently, The Emperor of All Maladies: A Biography of Cancer, made me wish I could do a do-over and go to medical school. The medical detail in Cutting For Stone was fascinating to me.
    Love,
    Teresa

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  9. Shannonmarie, that's wonderful that Jacob can read to Hayden too. I remember, though, that my brother was slower to learn to read than I was, and eventually I got frustrated because I'd get stuck reading to him when he was older than I was as a reader... But girls are often faster than boys, so it's likely that she'll be reading back to him soon!
    That she's influenced by food photography is so fascinating. What a great tool to have at your disposal if you want to 'sell' her on some food!
    love
    Ela

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  10. Hi Teresa,

    Thanks so much for looking in! Yes, it's a shame that you couldn't be at the Writers Conference: it was another really good one. Since I was already a big fan of Rita Dove, it was a huge thrill for me to find that she's so lovely in person too.

    That's interesting about the idea of a do-over and going to medical school. I could find myself with the same fantasy if I let myself go there: I find that whole world endlessly fascinating.

    I can imagine that an Indian-accented narrator would be great for "Cutting for Stone," although when I try to imagine Marion's accent, I think of it as having some Indian notes and a whole lot of other stuff too. I've seen "The Emperor of All Maladies on a shelf before and been struck by the similarity of title with Jhumpa Lahiri's (another Indian author's) "Interpreter of Maladies." But you're right: it would make a great follow up to "Cutting For Stone."

    love
    Ela

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  11. realized i missed a few of your posts! good thing I am finally down to U in my google reader. :-)

    i was pretty disappointed in that book from ani. you have to flip all over it for combinations of recipes and overall they are just basic. good enough for probably a beginner but there's at least 10 other raw books I'd list above it. i didn't even bother to read enough to know it was poorly edited. i just skip right to the recipes for the most part.

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  12. Wow--I hadn't thought about the disadvantages of having an initial letter that's so low in the alphabet! I do periodically think about renaming my blog, especially if I do the wordpress migrate. I'd love to make it more visible.

    Yes, I agree that the Ani book is somewhat disappointing: nothing really new or special, aimed at newbies but not user-friendly. My friend who lives in town who commented above isn't a rawie, and she also found it preachy.

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