Friday, April 6, 2012

HAWMC #6 Health-Related Haiku Day



Not surprisingly,
this prompt annoyed me slightly.
Haiku's so much more

than five, seven, five,
repeat ad lib, any theme,
counting syllables.

OK, now I've gotten that off my chest, let's see if I can play nice! The five-seven-five syllabic structure is not an obsessive rule in traditional haiku. What's more important is that there should be some sense of grounding in a specific season, including a specific "kigo" word that symbolizes or represents a season. 

Yesterday, I enjoyed using ekphrasis to muse about health, although I'd never done so before. Since health is closely tied to seasons for many of us--since, in fact, many of our health conditions feel like seasonal fluctuations manifesting in our bodies and psyches, let's see how much fun we can have with haiku!

The other symbolic piece I want to weave in today is the concept of persistence and resurrection in dirt. I recently repotted this aloe plant with dirt Phil grubbed up from under the house where it wasn't quite so frozen. In the warmth of the cabin, from that dirt sprouted a horsetail! You can see it to the left of the pot in the photo.
This plant, equisetum arvensis, renowned in superfoods circles as a great source of silica, is a grass from the age of the dinosaurs and is the most pernicious weed for gardeners in this area. It's a plant-fungus symbiote, with underground networks that can spread 30 feet in a year. You can break it into pieces and every node will grow. It feels like it's made of toughened glass.


Let Spring warm your dirt.
Plan your chosen cultivations.
See what weeds grow.

Seeds brood inert ~(in earth)
What might I allow to sprout
When I declare Spring?

Life--from dust to dust
Year--journey from seed to seed
Each death, a new life.

If my body fails
Let it fall and mix with earth
live on in new form.

If my mind should fail
Let it fall into my body
ground from which to rise.


I'm going to leave it there for today and see if I can get my work done, prepare for a weekend guest and continue to avoid succumbing to Phil's 'flu! I'm so grateful not to be worse afflicted, but I am working at about half my usual speed, which is difficult for me... Back tomorrow with at least one recipe.


YOUR health haikus?? I'd love to hear them.

8 comments:

  1. Wow. Your Haiku(s) is beautiful. Really. It's art in written form. So cleverly written, I might add.

    Also, that first one. :) That's kinda how I felt when I actually sat down to write the Health Haiku...

    And you certainly know your literature/poem information.

    I hope everyone is well and feeling better in your house. Rest up and take care!

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    1. Wow, Lori, thank you so much! I so appreciate your comments.
      Phil is pretty much better now, and I'm _going_ to be better!
      love
      Ela

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  2. Haha you made me laugh. Many a time I groaned at Haiku assignments in school but then forced them on my students of course later on. Love the last two especially.

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    1. Thanks, bitt--I'm so happy it got a laugh from you.
      love
      Ela

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  3. Your haiku is amazing. I didn't realize you were doing the challenge too. I am doing it on tumblr. Enjoy and happy holidays!

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    1. Thanks so much, Barbara! I'm looking forward to seeing what you're doing with this too.

      love
      Ela

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  4. Anastasia@healthymamainfo.comApril 10, 2012 at 8:37 AM

    Life--from dust to dust
    Year--journey from seed to seed
    Each death, a new life.
    This is so beautiful, simple and deep! Love your haiku!!

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